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hammer life by ~naruyondyfan:iconnaruyondyfan:

Categories Literature > Poetry > General Poetry > Spoken Word


Hammer; hammer knocking on a hard life
Chip away the cool, crisp coil in my heart
The days are long and hot, my heart is heated by the light
Hammer; hammer in my life
Help set my heart and mind free, hammer
Hard on what ever your hammering, help me please
Hammer away the hardships I faced so I can let go
In the heat your hammering away hammer; hammer of life
©2008 ~naruyondyfan
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Submitted: April 18
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this is an Alliteration poem for english, thier doing construction on my school that I go to and we were right above the construcion and this just poped in to my head! :)
there's not much to say on this, it was just a moment poem, I guess that the best way to put it.


- naruyondyfan :heart:

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~poetic--wings:iconpoetic--wings: Apr 18, 2008, 5:26:57 PM
I like it. :heart:

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"You shall love your crooked neighbor with your crooked heart." - W. H. Auden.

-Tay-
~naruyondyfan:iconnaruyondyfan: Apr 18, 2008, 5:49:36 PM
thank you :thanks:
:D

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- Our imperfectness is what makes us perfect
~ShadowXRougeRULES:iconShadowXRougeRULES: Apr 18, 2008, 7:15:15 PM
Nice as always

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Rouge:Even if the world goes against you I will always remain by your side...Remember that.
Shadow:I will
~naruyondyfan:iconnaruyondyfan: Apr 19, 2008, 7:29:22 AM
:thanks:

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- Our imperfectness is what makes us perfect
~ShadowXRougeRULES:iconShadowXRougeRULES: Apr 19, 2008, 3:35:08 PM
^^Welcome=D

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Rouge:Even if the world goes against you I will always remain by your side...Remember that.
Shadow:I will
~Mihashi-Harumi-chan:iconMihashi-Harumi-chan: Apr 20, 2008, 10:46:07 AM
cowl! I always like you poems, but sometimes internet acts weird an I can't comment

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Oh and remember kiddies, it takes 42 muscles in your face to frown... but only 4 muscles to reach out and rebuild that motherf*cker’s face
- I love Itachi!
- I hate Sasuke!
I don't play games... I play tricks!
~naruyondyfan:iconnaruyondyfan: Apr 20, 2008, 7:00:59 PM
lolz...sometimes mine does that too O.o

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- Our imperfectness is what makes us perfect
~Mihashi-Harumi-chan:iconMihashi-Harumi-chan: Apr 23, 2008, 12:09:28 PM
yeah it's kinda annoying don't ya think??
well I'm glad I COULD comment this one, cuz if not I would probably freak out ^^'

naruto: you always freak out, believe it..
me: wanna die?
naruto: NO! I... love you Maya-chan!
me: yay! *:hug:* anyways... it's cool! I like your work!
naruto: Heath-chan is the best!

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Oh and remember kiddies, it takes 42 muscles in your face to frown... but only 4 muscles to reach out and rebuild that motherf*cker’s face
- I love Itachi!
- I hate Sasuke!
I don't play games... I play tricks!
~meccahchildress:iconmeccahchildress: Apr 23, 2008, 12:40:24 PM
wow thats amazing keep you talent up.
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